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The story of Inez de Vries’s experiences in the summer of 1955 unfolds through a series of documents—some official, pulled from the prim and unforgiving files of Saint Clare’s School for Girls; others are more intimate, drawn from the journals, letters, and scribbled notes of the girls themselves. Some will appear typed and orderly; others will retain the texture of handwriting, rendered in a cursive-style font. Readers are invited to step into the role of archivist, assembling the story from these traces, and imagining the lives that fill the gaps between pages—the tensions, the alliances, the secrets too dangerous to write down. Not everything will be explained.
But Inez is watching. And she remembers.
This story goes back to 1938 and tells the story of Inez’s parents, especially Lady Gwendolyn “Honour” deVries, a St. Clare Old Girl who notices far more than most people realize.
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Introduction
The archive continues.
In these documents, the young Lady Honour de Vries begins to master her husband’s “exercises”—tasks meant to discipline her curiosity and temper her impulsiveness. Yet what began as a private game of observation now reaches beyond the drawing room. A tea in Chester Square leads to the American Embassy at Grosvenor Square, and the world of polite conversation begins to tremble with rumours of the coming war.
Through reports, annotations, and private diaries, we see the gradual shaping of a partnership: his precision against her wit, his restraint against her appetite for understanding. Honour still writes to please him—but she is also beginning to see, to listen, and to turn the rules of his game to her own advantage.
The tone remains domestic, almost playful. Yet under its surface, something colder and more intricate begins to form.
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Part Two
From: The Blue Room Collection, Saint Clare’s School for Girls
Recovered documents: November–December 1938
Exercise — 20 November 1938
You are to attend Mrs. Allerton’s tea tomorrow afternoon. Treat it as a continuation of your previous exercise.
Instructions:
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- Keep your gloves on at all times.
- Decline the cakes; they are dreadful, and you think better on an empty stomach.
- Smile when spoken to, but answer only when asked. Listen for what is not said. Women talk freely when they believe you bored.
- Write it afterwards, while the voices are still fresh.
- Keep the tone measured, not arch.
- Distinguish what you know from what you think you know.
Deliver your report to Darlington on the same evening. Late papers will be penalised.
You do not want to be a naughty girl, my Honour.